(untitled finger exercise)
Friday, 23 October 2009 07:33 To start, you take a middling line
And add a slightly longer one to draw
The senses and refine
Its meaning out without a flaw.
Good pace is always worth the effort taken.
Then, to obey the law
Of balance, add a third to waken
The reader with a shorter hitch of breath,
As if a smallish kraken
Intruded, promising not death
But startlement. The first line is the point,
The pivot of the meth-
od, focusing upon the joint
Of hinged recipricals. This isn't all:
For then you must annoint
The time with echoes, which should fall
Upon line ends in terza rima style:
The second musical
In rhyme next's first and third -- all while
Maintaining forward movement. Let it flow,
Accepting no denial
Of the brisk prace. There's nothing slow
Or sudden. Let it go.
---L.
And add a slightly longer one to draw
The senses and refine
Its meaning out without a flaw.
Good pace is always worth the effort taken.
Then, to obey the law
Of balance, add a third to waken
The reader with a shorter hitch of breath,
As if a smallish kraken
Intruded, promising not death
But startlement. The first line is the point,
The pivot of the meth-
od, focusing upon the joint
Of hinged recipricals. This isn't all:
For then you must annoint
The time with echoes, which should fall
Upon line ends in terza rima style:
The second musical
In rhyme next's first and third -- all while
Maintaining forward movement. Let it flow,
Accepting no denial
Of the brisk prace. There's nothing slow
Or sudden. Let it go.
—17 September 2003
Hetereometric terza rima -- I especially like how each line of a rhyme is progressively 5, 4, 3 feet of diminishment -- in a pattern that I've never actually used to any effect. Offered in case anyone else can use it. And yes, I am heavily influenced by Hollander's Rhyme's Reason, why do you ask?---L.