Friday, 23 October 2009

lnhammer: the Chinese character for poetry, red on white background (Default)
    To start, you take a middling line
And add a slightly longer one to draw
        The senses and refine

    Its meaning out without a flaw.
Good pace is always worth the effort taken.
        Then, to obey the law

    Of balance, add a third to waken
The reader with a shorter hitch of breath,
        As if a smallish kraken

    Intruded, promising not death
But startlement. The first line is the point,
        The pivot of the meth-

    od, focusing upon the joint
Of hinged recipricals. This isn't all:
        For then you must annoint

    The time with echoes, which should fall
Upon line ends in terza rima style:
        The second musical

    In rhyme next's first and third -- all while
Maintaining forward movement. Let it flow,
        Accepting no denial

    Of the brisk prace. There's nothing slow
        Or sudden. Let it go.

—17 September 2003

Hetereometric terza rima -- I especially like how each line of a rhyme is progressively 5, 4, 3 feet of diminishment -- in a pattern that I've never actually used to any effect. Offered in case anyone else can use it. And yes, I am heavily influenced by Hollander's Rhyme's Reason, why do you ask?

---L.

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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