Monday, 21 January 2013

lnhammer: the Chinese character for poetry, red on white background (Default)
(for the same celebration)

    Although I don't know
whether or not it existed
    in an ancient time,
the custom of a thousand
years shall begin with my lord.

—20 January 2013

Original by Sosei. (Okay, back in the saddle -- even if it isn't the best translation in the world, time to move on.) Omitted word: "living" for those thousand years, which I left understood. Technically, the "whether or not" has mixed tenses, with the positive part conjugated in a past tense and the negative in the present, giving the poem an interesting past/present/future construction; a literally rendering sounds very odd in English, however, and the phrase in any case the idiom was understood as entirely past.


inishie ni
ariki arazu-ba
shiranedomo
chitose no tameshi
kimi ni hajimemu


---L.

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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