The Spell

Tuesday, 27 October 2009 07:17
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Listen, my dear, and twist your ring --
To cast the spell you need these things:

      Fresh evergreen, a stone unseen,
          The crimson sun at dawn,
      A dancing bear at the county fair,
          A hidden dappled fawn.

Watch closely where the magic clings --
To cast the spell you need these things:

      An autumn freeze caught on the breeze,
          Grey fog that fills the valley,
      Twittering bats at twilight, cats,
          Maids and men who dally.

Remember what the river sings --
To cast the spell you need these things:

      The ancient moon behind a dune,
          A lamb or calf, depending,
      A red stone wall in light snow-fall,
          A circle neverending.

Live each day in what it brings --
The spell is cast in all these things.

—23 April 2000

One of the first things I wrote after spending a handful of years blocked.

---L.

Date: 5 November 2009 16:16 (UTC)
From: [personal profile] ex_asakiyume313
That's a lovely way to burst through into poetry again. I like the red stone wall in light snow-fall best of.... all.

I like the next one along, the steampunk one, too, but I had thought I'd like to try to make a poem response, and then one didn't come....

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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