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lnhammer ([personal profile] lnhammer) wrote2011-03-17 07:06 am

Kokinshu #553

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    I dozed, and saw him,
the one for whom I long,
    and ever since then
I have begun relying
upon those things called dreams.

—10 November 2010

Original by Ono no Komachi. A little more creative with the syntax than my usual, but that seemed the best way to handle the repeated verb inflections of personal recollection, which give them a mild emphasis.


utatane ni
koishiki hito o
miteshi yori
yume chô mono wa
tanomi-someteki


---L.

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