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    O mountain cuckoo
waiting until the Fifth Month,
    would that even now
you fluttered your wings and sang.
Your voice of old from last year ...

—1 September 2011

Original author unknown. The cuckoo generally starts singing in the lunisolar Fifth Month, roughly early-June to early-July. It's possible to read the last line as the subject of "sing" displaced out of normal sentence order, giving something like "you fluttered your wings and sang / with the same voice as last year" -- if there was some way in English to mimic the displacement that didn't make me wince.


satsuki matsu
yamahototogusi
uchi-habuki
ima mo nakanamu
kozo no furugoe


---L.

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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