Kokinshu #425
Saturday, 27 July 2013 06:43![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
lnhammer Reply.
Can we really wrap
such gems as these together
outside of a sleeve?
If you say, "That's so," well hey,
pass them here -- I'd like to see!
tamoto yori
hanarete tama o
tsutsumame ya
kore namu sore to
utsuse mimu kashi
---L.
Can we really wrap
such gems as these together
outside of a sleeve?
If you say, "That's so," well hey,
pass them here -- I'd like to see!
—5 July 2013
Original by Mibu no Tadamine. Same hidden topic, one-upped with an snarky response. I'm not sure I've quite caught the attention-getting sense of the final kashi.tamoto yori
hanarete tama o
tsutsumame ya
kore namu sore to
utsuse mimu kashi
---L.