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Before my bed, moonbeams so bright
It looks like frost upon the ground.
I raise my head, gaze at the bright moon;
I lower my head, and think of home.

夜思
床前明月光,
疑是地上霜。
举头望明月,
低头思故乡。

Again, no explicit “I” but it’s the really easy reading, especially given the personal topic of one’s hometown. (Pro-drop languages are so fun.) “It looks like” may be too mild—the original is closer to “(I) mistake it for”. This is sometimes given a raunchy reading: the moonlight-cum-frost is a naked bedmate, the moon(s) her breasts, and home between her legs.

Li Bai is generally considered one of China’s greatest poets ever. In his youth, he was a martial artist wandering the rivers and lakes—at least, so he claimed. Wuxia tropes really are that old.

(BTW, I’m not including pinyin pronunciations because Middle Chinese was significantly different, and there’s no solid agreement on the reconstructed sounds or, especially, tones.)

—L.

Date: 26 May 2019 15:56 (UTC)
sovay: (I Claudius)
From: [personal profile] sovay
Middle Chinese was significantly different, and there’s no solid agreement on the reconstructed sounds or, especially, tones.)

I didn't know that!

Date: 26 May 2019 16:33 (UTC)
sartorias: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sartorias
Wouldn't the two top ones be something like evening reverie?

Date: 26 May 2019 21:16 (UTC)
sartorias: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sartorias
Right about night.

These are great. Way above my pay grade, but that's how we learn, eh?

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

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