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O where, dear sir, might your house be?
This one lives in Heng Tang precinct.
Please pause your boat a moment, sir—
Might we be from the same hometown?

长干行 首一
君家何处住,
妾住在横塘。
停船暂借问,
或恐是同乡。

This took me down a couple rabbit holes, one of them because many editions of this collection place this (and the rest of this section in my base text) in a different section, the folk-style songs, and some use a different title, with song instead of ballad. (FWIW, they certainly fit in style with the folk songs. I don’t know enough yet to know whether I should rethink my choice of base texts.)

Another rabbit hole: Changgan is not Chang’an the capital, but a city now within the borders of modern Nanjing—on the banks of the Yangzi, with lots of canals.

The speaker uses a humble I used by women talking with men, and an honorific form for requesting he stop. “Precinct” is a guess, added by way of a gloss.

—L.

Date: 17 June 2019 18:33 (UTC)
sartorias: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sartorias
Yeah this one definitely has the character for gan, rather than an for the city name. (I'm fumbling and struggling way behind you)

Date: 17 June 2019 20:48 (UTC)
larryhammer: floral print origami penguin, facing left (Default)
From: [personal profile] larryhammer
Yup. Despite that, I've seen at least (more than?) one translation render it as the capital.

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

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