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[No excuses. None. Did it anyway. DON’T JUDGE ME.]

Not esteeming worthy men makes the people not compete;
Not prizing rare goods makes the people not steal;
Not seeing what they might desire makes their minds[3-1] not be disturbed.
Because of this, the rule of a sage
Empties their minds and fills their bellies,
Weakens their wills and strengthens their bones.
He strives to make the people have no knowledge or desires.
[He? This?] makes men with knowledge not dare act.
[When] they do not act,[3-2] then there is no disorder.

[3-1] Other texts have “the people”
[3-2] Other texts omit this phrase

不尚贤,使民不争;
不贵难得之货,使民不为盗;
不见可欲,使心不乱。
是以圣人之治,
虚其心,实其腹,
弱其志,强其骨。
常使民无知无欲。
使夫知者不敢为也。
为无为,则无不治。

Fun fact: in our best reconstituted pronunciations of Old Chinese during the supposed time of Laozi, about three-quarters of the Dao De Jing rhymed. (Thanks to 2500 years of language evolution, few traces of this remain in any Modern Chinese dialect.) So, yes, lineating as poetry is appropriate.

Yes, this is a direct jab at Confucianism and similar philosophical systems. With all the fuss made about the importance of the concept of 无为, inaction, in Daoist thought, I’m amused to see its first use is not as an ideal for the sage but rather not wanting scholar-officials to get uppity.

On a purely technical level, the crisscross parallelisms of ll.5-6 (empty/fill weaken/strengthen mind/will belly/bone) is breathtaking. From the perspective of a modern progressive westerner, this is breathtaking in an entirely other way, of course.

---L.

Date: 24 July 2024 16:29 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sartorias
In-triguing!

Date: 24 July 2024 17:30 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sartorias
I wonder if a Daoist state is even possible. Seems more suited to hermits. Especially as Zhuanzi interpreted it!

Date: 24 July 2024 17:59 (UTC)
larryhammer: floral print origami penguin, facing left (Default)
From: [personal profile] larryhammer
Zhuangzi was more a philosophical skeptic, as opposed to Laozi with his interest in creating a systemic ethical system.

Date: 24 July 2024 18:08 (UTC)
sartorias: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sartorias
Very true.

Date: 24 July 2024 22:52 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] thistleingrey
but rather not wanting scholar-officials to get uppity

Heh, but one wouldn't wish for inaction across the board, yes? Like, dear farmers, please continue your toil....

Date: 25 July 2024 17:36 (UTC)
mekare: He Xiaohui in a fighting stance (MLC Mama Xiaobao)
From: [personal profile] mekare
Thank you for sharing this!

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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