Monday, 12 November 2012

lnhammer: the Chinese character for poetry, red on white background (Default)
Written on fallen snow covering the trees.

    How unexpected in
the dormancy of winter --
    from between the trees
I almost see them as flowers,
the snowflakes that are falling.

—7 November 2012

Original by Ki no Tsurayuki. A more delicate and visual presentation of #330's conceit. Note the implicit contrast of white flakes and black trees, and possibly also the grey sky. Compare also #184.


fuyugomori
omoikakenu o
ko no ma yori
hana to miru made
yuki zo furikeru


---L.

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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