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lnhammer ([personal profile] lnhammer) wrote2009-12-04 07:35 am

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    A middle-aged man
flirts archly with a gaggle
    of pretty young things,
who pretend to be flattered
but won't repine when he's gone.

—3 December 2009

A response to the previous.

---L.

[personal profile] ex_asakiyume313 2009-12-04 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
On the contrary:

The gallant remark
from the middle-aged fellow
to the check-out girl:
She grins, he leaves, she watches
with a trace of wistfulness

[personal profile] ex_asakiyume313 2009-12-04 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Done!