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The five colors blind men’s eyes;
The five tones deafen men’s ears;
The five flavors deaden men’s mouths;
Galloping races and hunting the fields madden men’s minds;
Obtaining rare goods hinders men’s progress.[12-1]
Because of this, a sage serves the belly, not the eye,
And so banishes the latter and chooses the former.

[12-1] Other texts swap ll.4-5 with ll.2-3, which weakens the passage

五色令人目盲;
五音令人耳聋;
五味令人口爽;
驰骋田猎,令人心发狂;
难得之货,令人行妨。
是以圣人为腹不为目,
故去彼取此。

As an annotation for l.5-6, or the whole thing really, see chapter 3. I get the impression Laozi (if he existed) would have gotten along with Zeno the Stoic.

---L.

Date: 14 August 2024 15:19 (UTC)
mekare: Elementary: Joan looking down, melancholy (Joan pensive)
From: [personal profile] mekare
Forgive my ignorance since I haven't read the Dao de Jing before. Is this an endorsement of asceticism?

Date: 14 August 2024 15:44 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] sartorias
And Calvin.

Date: 14 August 2024 17:02 (UTC)
sartorias: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sartorias
True, but I was thinking more about the joylessness

Date: 14 August 2024 16:23 (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] movingfinger
The "five flavors" reminds me of Them in Good Omens (the book), trying to figure out how there can be thirty-nine flavors of ice cream. "There aren't thirty-nine flavors in the whole world."

(I know, it's not that at all)

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As language practice, I like to translate poetry. My current project is Chinese, with practice focused on Tang Dynasty poetry. Previously this was classical Japanese, most recently working through the Kokinshu anthology (archived here). Suggestions, corrections, and questions always welcome.

There's also original pomes in the journal archives.

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